You’ll be assessed on these 3 categories:
Story Foundation
Identifies which structural elements are working and which are quietly costing you readers
Reader Immersion
Assesses how well you're hitting the genre-specific tension that creates that "just one more chapter" compulsion
Obsession Potential
Evaluates distinctive traits that can transform readers into passionate fans who recommend your novel to everyone they know
What Authors Say
I've published close to 40 books across two pen names since 2018, and I always want to make sure my story has the foundation to make readers want to one-click my next book. I tried Lori's X-Ray and immediately got key insights into where my current story is strong and where I need to raise its obsession potential. If you want a clearer path to stories that make readers obsessed, Lori's X-Ray will point the way.
Nala Henkel-Aislin
Award-winning author of quirky rom-coms and cozy mysteries
I took Lori's X-Ray for a new project and it is legitimately magic. So insightful! It makes you take a hard look at your work from angles you hadn't considered. I'm gonna keep coming back to this for future books!
Megan Fuentes
Author of 7 fantasy and romance novels
